Betsy Gitelman
Betsy Gitelman
@piano35-edb On rare occasions, using first person plural can stand (usually when referring to EDB) but generally we don't use first person in doc. I made a couple passive voice,...
@piano35-edb Please review
Performed several levels of edits including using the correct levels of edits (per DJ's comment) and removing numbering from heads. Also changed the formatting of bullet items to use periods...
@jpe442 Overall this looked really great editorially. Most significant edits were for long sentences and overuse of parentheses. In some cases, commas would do just as well. In others, they...
@jpe442 Please review so I can get this merged. Thank you!
@djw-m @piano35-edb @jpe442 Thanks for the useful feedback. This should be ready to approve now. Thanks!