Edits to Pgd/5/consistency/crdt/docs 287 PR5928

Open ebgitelman opened this issue 1 year ago • 1 comments

What Changed?

Sep 19 '24 17:09 ebgitelman

@jpe442 Overall this looked really great editorially. Most significant edits were for long sentences and overuse of parentheses. In some cases, commas would do just as well. In others, they made the sentence hard to follow. Generally, parentheticals reduce readability.

I did have a handful of queries, mostly to verify that my edit was correct.

Sep 19 '24 17:09 ebgitelman

@jpe442 Please review so I can get this merged. Thank you!

Sep 30 '24 13:09 ebgitelman

@djw-m @piano35-edb @jpe442 Thanks for the useful feedback. This should be ready to approve now. Thanks!

Oct 18 '24 15:10 ebgitelman