jpotusek
jpotusek
minor changes to grammar
Check inline comments. Some parts are unclear what is meant by certain phrases.
Some minor revisions to word choice and grammar. (some grammar errors were left to give an informal way of speaking feel. See inline comment.
See inline comments. Some parts are unclear to me what is being discussed (possibly because I haven't read all the preceding chapters).
Minor rewrites to chapter 5: Here's a bit of money to get you started
Changes in spelling/grammar to "A rolling teakettle with ears" chapter.