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Rework texts in learn/css/first_steps/getting_started/index.md

Open cadamini opened this issue 3 years ago • 1 comments

Summary

I have shortened some texts and included procedures.

Motivation

I love both writing and learning. I think the MDN texts are wordy in some places. I have shortened some texts while reading about CSS (once more ...). In my opinion, numbered lists can help to structure the content.

At the first glance, using the preview link below, the indentation even looks OK ;)

Let me know if I am wrong and my edits do not help, please.

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Metadata

  • [ ] Adds a new document
  • [x] Rewrites (or significantly expands) a document
  • [ ] Fixes a typo, bug, or other error

cadamini avatar Jun 18 '22 23:06 cadamini

Preview URLs

Flaws

URL: /en-US/docs/Learn/CSS/First_steps/Getting_started Title: Getting started with CSS on GitHub Flaw count: 1

  • broken_links:
    • Link points to the page it's already on

External URLs

URL: /en-US/docs/Learn/CSS/First_steps/Getting_started Title: Getting started with CSS on GitHub

No new external URLs

(this comment was updated 2022-08-01 22:37:32.404307)

github-actions[bot] avatar Jun 18 '22 23:06 github-actions[bot]