The Lost Signal
The Lost Signal
the vertical sprite is still elongated
maybe use a different word than attractive? Feels weird… especially for something that comes off as different or mysterious.
> already discussed, and came to the conclusion that this is a bad idea. A very high level of moderation is required. Practice has shown that 80% of books on...
> > already discussed, and came to the conclusion that this is a bad idea. A very high level of moderation is required. Practice has shown that 80% of books...
 Spelling mistake here, it’s supposed to be “while in a”  And it would be better to say “protagonists” here as well
 One last thing that i want to comment on, would it be possible to make it so the same adjectives/adverbs unable to be repeated? Using the same word several...
since when was there a botany label
deus can make omnizine so maybe balance it around that?
Still doesnt make sense imo
> Maybe tone it down for the clown shoes and go this hard for the cluwne shoes? Just wanted to point out that i agree with this. It should be...