JJ
Revised and left comments on "A walk in the sun."
Just comments on things that were a bit unclear/vague and grammar mistakes. You have a distinct style of writing, and I think that gives a nice color to your narrator. :)
First, thanks a lot for all the comments, Problem is, there are some errors (Travis complained, see above) and if I accepted it I would have to work through the comments to get to the real corrections. So I guess it's better if we use this to discuss and then I'll effectively pull from your repo.
@aprilyou : if you change the #### to bold that should make the tests pass (tips here: https://guides.github.com/features/mastering-markdown/)
Tests actually complain about words it does not recognize, but the thing is that I would have to edit that comments out anyway. That's why it's better to make comments directly as issues. Easier to talk about them, too..
